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Ashiraladoni
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 52
Duluth, MN, USA

0 posted 2000-05-21 10:19 PM


There's a different kind of feeling that
I'm feeling these days.
No more oppression, no more sadness, no more
frustration, and no more anger.
I'm in love.

He took my breath away with that kiss. He made me
feel free. He held me tight, and stroked my hair with gentleness.
I love him
I want him
I need him
That's the different kind of feeling that's been going through my body, mind, and soul these days

I'm in love.

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Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
1 posted 2000-05-22 12:21 PM


nice work.. a special feeling.. described with special words..

Lynne

Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-05-22 11:40 AM


Sounds like the love bug has given you a big bite!
~~clear expression in this poem..nice writing!

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