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A Different Kind of Feeling
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A Different Kind of Feeling |
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Ashiraladoni Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 52Duluth, MN, USA |
There's a different kind of feeling that I'm feeling these days. No more oppression, no more sadness, no more frustration, and no more anger. I'm in love. He took my breath away with that kiss. He made me feel free. He held me tight, and stroked my hair with gentleness. I love him I want him I need him That's the different kind of feeling that's been going through my body, mind, and soul these days I'm in love. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
nice work.. a special feeling.. described with special words.. Lynne |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Sounds like the love bug has given you a big bite! ~~clear expression in this poem..nice writing! |
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