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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-05-21 11:25 AM


I don’t ask anything of you,
All I need is to know the truth.

You have to tell me,
So I can move on.

I am a human,
I do have a heart.

I love you so much,
It breaks my heart.

If your sure its over,
I must say goodbye.

I'm sure that I’ll cry,
But it won’t take long.

I fall in love fast,
But fall out faster.



 (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)


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Lonelypoet
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1 posted 2000-05-21 04:15 PM


Dear Tamma,
  You brought a tear to my eye because I'm going through something with the woman I love now. And I wish I could could 'fall out of it fast'. Good poem.

Ana
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2 posted 2000-05-21 05:52 PM


Great poem...although I think falling out is 100 times harder...

**Ana**

 "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -confucius
Nunc scio quit sit amor.
Now I know what love is. -Virgil

"Don't cry because it is over...smile because it happened."

Tamma
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3 posted 2000-05-21 05:55 PM


This is a completly different mood from the last few poems I've posted, and that is because today, Mikel broke it off with me

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Blondie69
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4 posted 2000-05-22 10:34 PM


hey, that was an awsome poem, but don't worry, if you were dumped by that guy, u were too good for him, but i know exactly how you feel, and that feeling sux.
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5 posted 2000-05-22 11:03 PM


Wonderful poem, Tamma...my boyfriend broke it off with me last week..we had been dating 10 months.  It's hard, but I've been much happier without that stress of being lied to and I know that I will find love..as will you.    Keep up the great work!

 *Krista Knutson*

~We are only truly lost when we have lost ourselves~

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