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Teen Poetry #2

Death of Patience

JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15

Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-05-23 11:55 PM

Emotion is running through me,
Like the wind blowing your kisses away,
This pain has caused me to see,
That I love you in everyway.

Keep me close to your heart,
And you will hear my heart breaking,
While we are so far part,
My soul is aching.

I dream of you at night,
About our love so far,
Oh,how much I want to fight,
To catch our falling star.

Is our love high enough,
To reach our destiny,
This is so tough,
With all the hurt in me.

I'm not sure I can take it any longer,
We are so far from our goal,
This should be making us stronger,
But it's only killing my soul.
~JennyeMeshan

This poem was written a few days before I found out the good news that changed our reationship around and made it much much more bearable. We still have to be apart for a little while longer, but we will make it through. I can't believe I actually made it through a "small" yet very LARGE ordeal. Nate and I must be meant to be because I wouldn't have made it this far otherwise and I was just about to give up but a little vioce inside me told me everything will be alright. I love him so much and I hope we stay together forever.

Hope you liked the poem!

"If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-05-24 02:45 PM

I like your poem...er, yeah, congrats for surviving your ordeal! I wish you and him much happiness.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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