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Cecil, Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-05-23 11:55 PM

Emotion is running through me,
Like the wind blowing your kisses away,
This pain has caused me to see,
That I love you in everyway.

Keep me close to your heart,
And you will hear my heart breaking,
While we are so far part,
My soul is aching.

I dream of you at night,
About our love so far,
Oh,how much I want to fight,
To catch our falling star.

Is our love high enough,
To reach our destiny,
This is so tough,
With all the hurt in me.

I'm not sure I can take it any longer,
We are so far from our goal,
This should be making us stronger,
But it's only killing my soul.

This poem was written a few days before I found out the good news that changed our reationship around and made it much much more bearable. We still have to be apart for a little while longer, but we will make it through. I can't believe I actually made it through a "small" yet very LARGE ordeal. Nate and I must be meant to be because I wouldn't have made it this far otherwise and I was just about to give up but a little vioce inside me told me everything will be alright. I love him so much and I hope we stay together forever.     Hope you liked the poem!

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child

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Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-05-24 02:45 PM

I like your, yeah, congrats for surviving your ordeal! I wish you and him much happiness.

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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