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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina 
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*These are the lyrics I wrote for my bands next gig. It's actually a song, but I just wanted to see if any of ya'll like it. Thanx guys!* Similarly strange is The girl who sits in your doorway What I can't explain is The hell you put her through today You're not a lover You're not a friend You're not another She'll be your end When the world comes crashing down You won't still be popular You will find The debt unsigned And shadows crawling on the floor In her head she cries In her head she dies In her head, inside her crazy head She flys to me As she lets go she hears me say Come, my pretty one Bring your tears and burn them in the golden sun Leave your sorrows here Just close your eyes, my dear He never meant for it to go this far But I am strength, and I am where you are Underestimated is The crime you hid beneath your bed So approximated is Your living lie that she was fed You're not a hero You're not a king You're not a good man But she's everything When the world comes crashing down You won't still be popular You will find The debt unsigned And flames crawling on the floor In her head she cries In her head she dies In her head, inside her crazy head She flys to me As she lets go she hears me say Come, my pretty one Bring your tears and burn them in the golden sun Leave your sorrows here Just close your eyes, my dear He never meant for it to go this far But I am love,and I am where you are Take one look in to her eyes All the pain she can't disguise Her blood is on your hands Can't wash it away Take one look into her soul See the bitter, aching hole Her blood is on your hands Never wash it, can't wash it away Your violence still stands But when the world comes crashing down You won't still be popular You will find There's no rewind The past that is behind you Forcing your head to the floor In your head you cry In your head you die In your head, inside your crazy head You should have learned to fly...... In her head she cries In her head she dies In her head,inside her crazy head She flys to me Flying just to hear me say Come, my pretty one Bring your tears and burn them in the golden sun Leave your sorrows here Just close your eyes, my dear I promise you, it will not go this far Because you're home, and I am where you are Yes, I am where you are It's another world But it's something more than ordinary Such a lovely day And it's nothing more than ordinary living That you're living - Lit |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Good lyrics....set to music, it's probably even better. ~~nice writing~~ |
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Karen Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 36Utah |
I loved the lyrics. Last night my boyfriend and I broke up because he was a coward. The pain hurt me so bad, but it all stopped after I talked to my best friend. I love the part that says, "In her head she cries, In her head she dies, In her head, inside her crazy head" Thanks for posting it. Good luck. Karen |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
Very pretty lyric! I like it, and someday I'd love to hear it set to music? I'll listen for it on the radio soem day  )Crystal "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all." It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence. Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen. I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits. |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is fantastic! I love it, it has beautiful words and I just love everything about it. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Thank you all for the nice compliments! we played this at our show and it went really well. i love you guys!! It's another world But it's something more than ordinary Such a lovely day And it's nothing more than ordinary living That you're living - Lit |
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Daysleeper Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 119 |
This is extremely excellent... I'll be looking for it on the top 10...  What instrument do you play?...Daysleeper... "We prefer to do things comfortably" said the Controller. "But I don't want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin." "In fact," said Mustapha Mond, "you're claiming the right to be unhappy." "Alright then," said the Savage defiantly, "I'm claiming the right to be unhappy." -Aldous Huxley "Brave New World" |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Well, I'm not so sure about the whole top-10 thing, cause we're just a local band, but hey, I'm flattered! I play guitar, tamborine, and do vocals, depending on which song we play. (we're a multi-talented group) Just to tell ya some other stuff, our band name is Valet Parking, there's 6 of us, we have a permanent drummer and base player, the other four of us do guitar or vocals, usually two people sing and one of those two will play tamborine while the other two play guitar. Confusing, eh? yeah, I know. Oh, we play like punk?grunge music, with a bit of hard-core thrown in sometimes. Okay I'll really shut up now. Crazy. *~Meredith~* It's another world But it's something more than ordinary Such a lovely day And it's nothing more than ordinary living That you're living - Lit |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Wow, Meredith, this is great.. yah u must tell us when u become famous, so we can listen to your songs on the radio.. this is just fabulous!! ^_^ Lynne |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Thank you so much, Yu Lan! Your poetry rocks too. And if I ever DO become famous, you guys will get the cd free of charge! ( dreaming never harmed anyone.........) Peace out. *~Meredith~* It's another world But it's something more than ordinary Such a lovely day And it's nothing more than ordinary living That you're living - Lit |
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bulletproof2312 Junior Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 28Beaumont Tx, 77707 |
Hey, way cool Mer... And next time I want to be in the audience 'kay?... Smile on "Here I stand I can do none other"---Luther |
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