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The Truth Within My Smile
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The Truth Within My Smile |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Sorry I've been posting quite a bit guys...but I've wrote a lot of poetry in my lifetime and i don't share it with a lot of people so you guys are like my outlet, and i look forward to your responses. The Truth Within My Smile You see a smile on my face, But inside everything's wrong. My heart is breaking, And has been for too long. I could pick up the pieces, And move on with my life. That feels like I've been stabbed, Through the back with a knife. You've lying to someone, Either me or the other girl. That fact along, Makes me want to hurl. As I begin to pick up the pieces, Of my scattered about heart, I can't help my feelings, Whether we're together or apart. The pieces are there, All but one. Our relationship has barely started, And I don't want it to be done. I don't want to lost this battle, The most important thing to me. That's something I don't think, You even see. Please chose, Me or Jess. I know you're confused, And this whole thing's a mess. You know I'm here, As your girl, or your friend. But either way, My heart will always mend. I don't know how to tell you this, But I'm falling in love with you. Falling so fast, There's nothing I can do. I had to tell you this somehow, I'm sorry to do it this way, But there's nothing left for me to do, And nothing left for me to say. - written- July 1999 "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do." "The role of a writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin "Follow your own heart, not others." |
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Dina Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 10 |
I loved this peom that you wrote. It touched me in so many ways. Keep up the great work  Dina |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Hey there! Wow, that sucks... I have been in a situation like that (only i was the guy, respectively (: ) Assumming, he's not trying to get both of you (hehe), he's probally confused as hell. Hmm, seeming this is a screwed up world we live in, i'm guessing that your also good friends with the other girl and this is tearing your friendship apart, am i close? Ah highschool, if it wern't for it, we might have somewhat normal lives...well, probally not (: Ok, so back to the point of this forum, great poem, this is easy to relate to... Deranger ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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