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Vball Chickie1624
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116
New York

0 posted 2000-05-20 11:44 PM

Sorry I've been posting quite a bit guys...but I've wrote a lot of poetry in my lifetime and i don't share it with a lot of people so you guys are like my outlet, and i look forward to your responses.

The Truth Within My Smile

You see a smile on my face,
But inside everything's wrong.
My heart is breaking,
And has been for too long.
I could pick up the pieces,
And move on with my life.
That feels like I've been stabbed,
Through the back with a knife.
You've lying to someone,
Either me or the other girl.
That fact along,
Makes me want to hurl.
As I begin to pick up the pieces,
Of my scattered about heart,
I can't help my feelings,
Whether we're together or apart.
The pieces are there,
All but one.
Our relationship has barely started,
And I don't want it to be done.
I don't want to lost this battle,
The most important thing to me.
That's something I don't think,
You even see.
Please chose,
Me or Jess.
I know you're confused,
And this whole thing's a mess.
You know I'm here,
As your girl, or your friend.
But either way,
My heart will always mend.
I don't know how to tell you this,
But I'm falling in love with you.
Falling so fast,
There's nothing I can do.
I had to tell you this somehow,
I'm sorry to do it this way,
But there's nothing left for me to do,
And nothing left for me to say.

- written- July 1999

 "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do."

"The role of a writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say."
- Anais Nin

"Follow your own heart, not others."

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since 2000-05-20
Posts 10

1 posted 2000-05-21 12:36 PM

I loved this peom that you wrote. It touched me in so many ways. Keep up the great work  

since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
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2 posted 2000-05-22 12:57 PM

Hey there!

Wow, that sucks... I have been in a situation like that (only i was the guy, respectively (: ) Assumming, he's not trying to get both of you (hehe), he's probally confused as hell.  Hmm, seeming this is a screwed up world we live in, i'm guessing that your also good friends with the other girl and this is tearing your friendship apart, am i close?   Ah highschool, if it wern't for it, we might have somewhat normal lives...well, probally not (:  

Ok, so back to the point of this forum, great poem, this is easy to relate to...


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