Teen Poetry #2 |
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You Forgot.. |
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KiLeZ New Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 8 |
*You Forgot* You forgot to give my heart back, when you left me standing here. You forgot to give my smile back, but instead you left a tear. You forgot to give me happiness, so now i'm always blue. You forgot to give my mind back, and now i dont know what to do. You forgot to give my eyes back, you're still the only one i see. You forgot to give my laugh back, instead you laugh at me. You forgot to give my hands back, i still feel your gentle touch. You forgot to give my life back, and im missing you so much. But there are some things, that i'll never forget. Like the day we kissed, and the day we met. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Welcome to Passsions!! Powerful poem dude, very good. Love bites, dont it...hehe. I hope this is an indication to your furture works...cause i be looking for them. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Welcome, KiLeZ.. this is beautiful, so well put, I can't agree with the above atatement, as i have never had my heart broken, but it sure don't sound like much fun, that's for sure.. *_^ Love your work... gotta read more!!.. Lynne |
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Daysleeper Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 119 |
This is great! Very sad, but beautifully written, and touchingly true. Keep posting.... ...Daysleeper... "We prefer to do things comfortably" said the Controller. "But I don't want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin." "In fact," said Mustapha Mond, "you're claiming the right to be unhappy." "Alright then," said the Savage defiantly, "I'm claiming the right to be unhappy." -Aldous Huxley "Brave New World" |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
Hey. exellent poem. i know how you feel, i've had my heart broken before. lookin forward to reading more of your poems = ) keep writing! - Danielle "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you want to do." "The role of a writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin "Follow your own heart, not others." |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Welcome to passions KiLeZ ![]() This is a very beautiful poem and one can feel the emotion when reading it. Nice job and looking forward to reading more of your work. |
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Ana Junior Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 16iLLINOIs |
Excellent poem! Being left heartbroken is very hard. I look forward to more of your work!! **Ana** ![]() |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey, it's good to have ya here! I liked your poem, it's like a page out of my own life, too. Yup, I've gone through a bad break up and it wasn't fun. So sorry, but hang in there and eat lots of ice cream, cause ice cream kicks butt! Okay, peace babe. *~Meredith~* It's another world But it's something more than ordinary Such a lovely day And it's nothing more than ordinary living That you're living - Lit |
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Dina Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 10 |
Wow I really enjoyed this poem ![]() Dina ![]() [This message has been edited by Dina (edited 05-22-2000).] |
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