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| Teen Poetry #2 |
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I'll know when my love comes along.... |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I have never been in love before but this is how I think it should be. I’ll know.... I’ll know when my love comes along..... He’ll look into my eyes and see into my heart. He’ll smile a special smile just for me, We will always be together, never apart. His touch will send a surge of electricity through my soul, I will melt into his soft and tender embrace. My lips with his slender fingers he will trace, So in love will we be. The man of my dreams will never betray me, His love for me will be so real. I won’t ever have to worry about being alone, He will promise me that with a kiss as the seal. His kiss will fill my heart and soul with everlasting joy, We will walk beneath the stars all night. With him everything will seem so right. So in love will we be. I have never been in love before, But I’ll know when everlasting love comes along. He will always be able to make me happy, He will fill my heart with a beautiful song. His love will be my life long pleasure, forever and ever, We’ll dance in the moonlight- dance all night. Into my life he will bring dazzling light. So in love will we be. Forever and ever, till death do us part, I’ll love him with every bit of my heart. So in love will we be. |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
What a wonderful expression of love. Wow! I truly hope you find that love someday. It will be so special. Thank you Lindsay |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Very beautiful. I hope I find that kind of love someday, preferably tommorrow. j/k Awesome phrasing and vocabulary, most effective. But you forgot to say 'he will love chick-flicks and never have morning breath'. Oh well, I guess perfection doesn't exist outside of Hanes-for-men underwear models. (besides, they probably shave their entire bodies....gross) Peace babe.  Listening to my 'Human Clay' cd <creed>, Meredith *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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kayli Junior Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 27 |
right on! thats just what i was thinking... real good later ~kayli |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
WoW... beautifully written, and such a great thought. It's nice to see someone else besides myself has such a great idea about what true love is. Great job. Keep up the good work. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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Michele New Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 9 |
Aawwww.....how did you read my thoughts?j/k really,though,that is what I think all of us want.A deep,true,everlasting love.You write beautifully!!! Keep writing, Michele |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Thank you for the replies all of you!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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