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Burring The Roses
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Burring The Roses |
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Jessica182 Junior Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 15 |
Your love is like burried roses Under fresh soil The fresh blood That just came to a boil The roses that survived under the trees The cold wind that blew Still did not prevent These roses that grew Forgive these roses while they burst into flames The bueaty has been destroyed And so has the games Take these ashes And cherish them son For these are the roses That grew without the sun |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Interesting peom you have written. Lots of expression and imagery! ~~nice writing~~ |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Nice poem and like Danny said full of expression and imagery. I especially like the last four lines.  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
That was a great poem, I love the imagery Your love is like burried roses Under fresh soil The cold wind that blew Still did not prevent These roses that grew Forgive these roses while they burst into flames The bueaty has been destroyed And so has the games Take these ashes And cherish them son For these are the roses That grew without the sun |
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