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Forgive me Love..
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Forgive me Love.. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Forgive me Love, for my affliction, When I confused you with my grief, When I defended my conviction When I stood by my dull belief That Love must blossom first in woe, Then slowly grow into its skin. How much of love I didn’t know! How much of grief I haven’t seen! And now I recollect those days, When she was there to sympathize. The hope was shinning in her gaze, I loved to watch her with my eyes, Especially when filled with sadness. She watched me suffer with affection And pitied me, then I with gladness, Enjoyed to be in my dejection. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
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Wow, this is a powerful poem. I know a lot of people like this, and you describe the situation perfectly. Wonderful writing, my friend. I hope things work out for you, now that you see the truth. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is really powerful and descriptive...all the best! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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