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the dark angel
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0 posted 2000-05-17 03:06 PM


Do you ever feel
like there's no way out
like a drowning child
struggling to get out
of this darkened pool
where arms reach like tentacles
struggling to pull you further
and to demean you right to the pinacles
of your shivering form

But then a hand
reaches to pull you out
you graciously accept
and your angel pulls you out
it only takes a moment
but that moment lasts forever
when you both realise
you were meant to be together

You and your angel
hand in hand
walking along the golden sand
but the skies darken
and your angel dies
leaving you standing
alone but alive
but a feeling of death inside

Your face turns black
and wretched with hate
as somebodys plan
uses YOUR angel as bait
your heart shrivels and you start to cry
but what you don't know is
your angel never dies.

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LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-05-17 03:22 PM


It's wonderful to find your "angel", but it hurts when to seem to lose them. Truth is, is this person is really your angel, they will stick around, and if not, they weren't your angel in the first place. Good poem.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Deranger
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2 posted 2000-05-17 10:07 PM


Hey Dark angel!

True love always seems out of reach, for me, i'm glad that that not the story for the rest of us!  Great poem and good luck with your "Angel" hehe.

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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-05-18 07:59 AM


This is beautiful! You express what I have felt before so beautifully.....

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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