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my angels! |
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the dark angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 37 |
Do you ever feel like there's no way out like a drowning child struggling to get out of this darkened pool where arms reach like tentacles struggling to pull you further and to demean you right to the pinacles of your shivering form But then a hand reaches to pull you out you graciously accept and your angel pulls you out it only takes a moment but that moment lasts forever when you both realise you were meant to be together You and your angel hand in hand walking along the golden sand but the skies darken and your angel dies leaving you standing alone but alive but a feeling of death inside Your face turns black and wretched with hate as somebodys plan uses YOUR angel as bait your heart shrivels and you start to cry but what you don't know is your angel never dies. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's wonderful to find your "angel", but it hurts when to seem to lose them. Truth is, is this person is really your angel, they will stick around, and if not, they weren't your angel in the first place. Good poem. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Hey Dark angel! True love always seems out of reach, for me, i'm glad that that not the story for the rest of us! Great poem and good luck with your "Angel" hehe. --------------------- "The best part about the internet is that it is the only place that having two personas won't get you carted off to the loony bin" |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is beautiful! You express what I have felt before so beautifully..... Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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