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since 2000-03-20
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0 posted 2000-05-15 08:44 PM

understanding is beyond words expressed
we helped eachother when we were feeling depressed
elighten the love in which we have embraced
we guided eachother through the problems we faced
though we are never together we are never apart
i love you more and more with every bead of my heart
not all soul mates are meant to be
but your love is strong enough for me
you are someone barley anyone gets to know
gentle soft spirit with such a warm glow
no matter what you are going through
i will always be there for you

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1 posted 2000-05-15 09:58 PM

Ah, this is a beautiful poem. It is wonderful when we find our soulmates... great writing.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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2 posted 2000-05-15 10:11 PM

Such beauty...hold on to that love, Jessica. Cherish it.  This is a lovely piece of work.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~We are only truly lost when we have lost ourselves~

Lucius Cade
since 2000-03-23
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3 posted 2000-05-16 01:01 AM

Such a powerful poem for a powerful idea. To have a soul mate is to be complete in life I beleive.

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems

Night Chica
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since 2000-04-06
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4 posted 2000-05-17 06:31 PM

Jessica,  this is a lovely poem that you have written.  And I agree with Lucius the idea of a soulmate is a powerful idea.  The whole concept and your piece hits very close to home and I'm speaking from personal experience when I tell you to enjoy that love as much as you possibly can.


 I was never one to patiently pick up broken fragments and glue them together again and tell myself that the mended whole was as good as new. What is broken is broken- and I'd rather remember it as it was at its best than mend it and see the broken places as long as I lived.

-- Margaret Mitchell

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Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-05-18 08:44 AM

Finding a soulmate is amazing, you can never really lose them, no matter how far apart you end up you are together in spirit. Wonderful poem.

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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