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Jessica182 Junior Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 15 |
The contrast of which can never be known Why people feel as if they are alone When surrounded by love When all they are missing is someone to think of Lights of darkness sooth the walls Never again filled with a guide A trapped soul lost inside Never again to be exposed to the light The darkness burns their eyes and takes their sight The doors which are never unsealed All the secrets which are revealed An anger that is never found An noisy room that is filled with sound I see a gloomy face of a lonley man His face old yet young, it is weird the way that he stands The black roses that grew Images seen, but never new All things repeated The old man pleaded To be let out of that place It could have been easy but that's not the case But there's a lesson you see, Somethings are meant to be |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Very mysterious, but very understandable <don't ask!> I really liked this. It made me think a little at the end about "somethings are meant to be" Welcome, and keep up the good work  (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Enjoyed reading this poem. Good work with the rhyme! ~~nice writing~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Daysleeper Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 119 |
This is so full of images, and wonderful. * * * The black roses that grew Images seen, but never new * * * Simply gorgeous! ...Daysleeper... "We prefer to do things comfortably" said the Controller. "But I don't want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin." "In fact," said Mustapha Mond, "you're claiming the right to be unhappy." "Alright then," said the Savage defiantly, "I'm claiming the right to be unhappy." -Aldous Huxley "Brave New World" |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Very thought-provoking piece, this. Thanks for sharing it. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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