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aussie_princesss Junior Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 15Australia |
Late one night on icq A message appeared, I said Hi, how are you You told me your name, and the things that you do The love that you had lost, and your best friend too You seemed a nice guy and for hours we sat Telling me your pain and the girl who done that I met your friends who were all in chat The days went by, we had lots of fun Even though we were'nt in the sun How I wished we could be one But that did'nt happen, it was'nt to be She came back again,and talked to me She wanted you back now,this I could see Well friends we remain, or so it seams Once again, we have broken dreams Lets just be friends now, maybe i'm being mean You thought I did'nt care,but you were wrong Why did'nt you think i was serious all along I was'nt playing games, or stringing you along Maybe you will see that, now that I am gone |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
"maybe you can see it now, now that im gone" very powerful princess...i like this one too...cant wait for ur next posts!! "Falling in love is just that - falling. Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe. Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees. But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is very powerful....and sad too. You have told your story very well, thank you for sharing it! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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