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since 2000-05-17
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0 posted 2000-05-17 09:59 PM

Late one night on icq
A message appeared, I said Hi, how are you
You told me your name, and the things that you do
The love that you had lost, and your best friend too
You seemed a nice guy and for hours we sat
Telling me your pain and the girl who done that
I met your friends who were all in chat
The days went by, we had lots of fun
Even though we were'nt in the sun
How I wished we could be one

But that did'nt happen, it was'nt to be
She came back again,and talked to me
She wanted you back now,this I could see
Well friends we remain, or so it seams
Once again, we have broken dreams
Lets just be friends now, maybe i'm being mean
You thought I did'nt care,but you were wrong
Why did'nt you think i was serious all along
I was'nt playing games, or stringing you along
Maybe you will see that, now that I am gone

© Copyright 2000 Rhiannon Ritorto - All Rights Reserved
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 2000-05-17 11:19 PM

"maybe you can see it now,
now that im gone" very powerful princess...i like this one too...cant wait for ur next posts!!

 "Falling in love is just that - falling.
Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe.
Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees.
But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die."

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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-05-18 06:25 AM

This is very powerful....and sad too. You have told your story very well, thank you for sharing it!

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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