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Deranger
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

0 posted 2000-05-13 07:45 PM


This is dedicated to my ex-girlfriend, though we were seperated, she taught me many lessons, and gave me love that brings me joy to this day.

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Love, true and mine
Feel you too the shivers up your spine?
Whenever we’re close, I love you most!

Embrace me, to maybe erase,
My fears, never turn you to tears,
Never when I am near

Love, true and told,
True never to be sold,
Life’s again green and serene.

No more broken hearts,
This is no token affair.
Our life’s bliss

Believing this,
Its like someone is deceiving us,
But I know, we are together.

In the end, that’s all that matters,
No more clattering on the floor of despair,
Just lost in your soft hair. No more cares.

Staring into your eyes,
What a place, full of your loving grace,
No more my darkness of empty space.

I think of this, all the time
We kiss, never to again miss
The joys of this passion, contrived in our unique fashion




© Copyright 2000 Alexander Crino - All Rights Reserved
Lucius Cade
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 235
Saskatchewan
1 posted 2000-05-14 10:39 PM


Wow, such positive words about a lost love, I love your perception of the relationship. Very nice.

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems

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