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Jasmine
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since 2000-02-15
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0 posted 2000-05-11 11:23 PM




the boy with purple hair
i watched from afar
never imagining he would be mine

he had such an air of confidence
barely noticing all the eyes upon him
i hoped he didn't notice mine

now when he catches me staring,
he kisses me and tells me he loves me
my boy with purple hair.

                   *Jasmine*


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Lucius Cade
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 235
Saskatchewan
1 posted 2000-05-12 01:40 AM


I love this poem! Really I do, I cant really explain it, but it really caught my attention. Awesome stuff.

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
2 posted 2000-05-13 08:43 AM


This is such a sweet poem.  

It is always good to feel this way. It's good for the soul.  

~AF~

 "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry


Daysleeper
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since 2000-04-23
Posts 119

3 posted 2000-05-14 11:08 PM


I really like this piece! Very nicely written and compact, but very expressive...

*     *     *

he had such an air of confidence
barely noticing all the eyes upon him
i hoped he didn't notice mine

*     *     *

I love that verse... Just great.

...Daysleeper...


 "We prefer to do things comfortably" said the Controller.
"But I don't want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin."
"In fact," said Mustapha Mond, "you're claiming the right to be unhappy."
"Alright then," said the Savage defiantly, "I'm claiming the right to be unhappy." -Aldous Huxley "Brave New World"



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