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ezt
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since 2000-03-13
Posts 19


0 posted 2000-05-12 05:49 AM




It gets harder as time goes by
but I still got a picture of you in my mind
keeps hearing your voice
as my tears rolls slowly down
and spell your name on the ground
and breakes my heart it makes me all confused
but I know just what to do

Tell you those three magic words
release all you hurts
make your every wish come true
if I could I´d turn back time
and all the lonely nights
to show how much I care

Brian-

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anonymousfemale
Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
1 posted 2000-05-12 06:54 AM


Welcome back Brian  

This poem is sad and yet so true. Many a time I wished that I could have turned abck the clock but it is impossible to do. Try to get by or tell her everything you want to say.  

~AF~

 "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry


Deranger
Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
2 posted 2000-05-12 06:36 PM


Magic indeed,

The past is regrettably unchangable, but the future is anything and everything you want it to be, alls you have to do is make it so (Which is admitedly harder than thinking about).

Love is a powerful force.  Oh, ya i think i have learned about women is that they never tire of hearing those words.

Deranger  

Daysleeper
Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 119

3 posted 2000-05-12 07:01 PM



Hey EZT. Feelings easy to relate to. I like this, a whole lot. Esspecially...

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keeps hearing your voice
as my tears rolls slowly down
and spell your name on the ground

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I haven't been around long enough to have read any of your other work, but this is great.

...Daysleeper...


 "We prefer to do things comfortably" said the Controller.
"But I don't want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, I want goodness. I want sin."
"In fact," said Mustapha Mond, "you're claiming the right to be unhappy."
"Alright then," said the Savage defiantly, "I'm claiming the right to be unhappy." -Aldous Huxley "Brave New World"



angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
4 posted 2000-05-13 04:50 PM


Of course I like this one, but I told you that in the e-mail I sent you, didn't I?  It makes me think of the one person who means something to me in the area I live in...
Keep up the good work.
Lots of love,
Kristi Lynn

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