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Teen Poetry #2

This Far...

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

0 posted 2000-05-11 10:41 PM

A quick foreword. This was found in my computer, its dated from 1995!!!! So don't worry guys, i not this depressed.

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This Far

I feel it
Pushing me
Farther and farther
Over the edge
Into the dark

I cannot stop it
The darkness is closing around me
Drowning in the gloom
Suffocating in the misery
Falling out of hope
Out of life

This far and no farther I cry!
But it does not hear
Does not care
Over the edge I fall
Into the abyss
No return
No hope

brendon2k
Junior Member

since 2000-05-11

Posts 38
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1 posted 2000-05-12 12:48 PM

Great Poem!
I really enjoyed this one. It represents how we all feel or have felt befor. Love the choice of words use.

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

2 posted 2000-05-12 01:42 AM

Thanks man! I really like you stuff as well, i try to reply to all of it.

the dark angel
Junior Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 37

3 posted 2000-05-13 12:39 PM

great poem d. I know how you felt. Good topic, sommat that people are constantly feeling but never put into words. I like your work and try to reply!
The dark angel
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