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| Teen Poetry #2 |
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carry me to safety (acrostic) |
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tawny Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 14 |
Carry me into knowledge About how I should React to your unfeeling tears. Release me or You will erase me. Make me realize your deception. Erase me. Trust me with truth. Open an unseen trap. Sanctuary disappears at your Arrival in my world. I have Forgotten how to feel. Entice me with pretty memories, Trade painful remembrances: You've erased me. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Tawny, great job with this Acrostic. I like to write them as well. They're a little more challenging. ~~very nice writing~~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Great piece of poetry here. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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