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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
My anger begins to kick in every word that was said made me mad I want to break your words You blame me for wrongful doings you make me seem like a criminal when I haven't done a thing All your words sounds like jibberish too many words I don't understand I want to scream I start shaking adreniline inside of me is rising drastically just leave me alone I can't handle all of this right now my head is throbbing I feel like exploding I feel like I'm a time bomb about to explode on the wrong people hurting people close to me Why can't everyone just get along and stop fighting and stop worrying about money My blood boils when I think of the situation I want to get you back for what you've done but I won't lower myself to your level Just leave me alone everyone I just want to be let me be |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Poe! Thats wonderful expression. Stay calm as always there is a point in you which remains untouched by anything. Be yourself and why you should change it. You'll do good. Sincerely A_l |
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tawny Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 14 |
i like the whole idea of 'breaking your words' because that is an impossible thought that has crossed my mind more than once. the whole aloneness feeling, along with the decline in anger at the end show your point through to the end. well done. |
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