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poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

0 posted 2000-05-10 11:55 PM



My anger begins to kick in
every word that was said made me mad
I want to break your words

You blame me for wrongful doings
you make me seem like a criminal
when I haven't done a thing

All your words sounds like jibberish
too many words I don't understand
I want to scream

I start shaking
adreniline inside of me is rising drastically
just leave me alone

I can't handle all of this right now
my head is throbbing
I feel like exploding

I feel like I'm a time bomb
about to explode on the wrong people
hurting people close to me

Why can't everyone just get along
and stop fighting
and stop worrying about money

My blood boils when I think of the situation
I want to get you back for what you've done
but I won't lower myself to your level

Just leave me alone
everyone
I just want to be
let me be

© Copyright 2000 Jessica Bjarnason - All Rights Reserved
amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-05-11 12:10 PM


Hi Poe!
Thats wonderful expression. Stay calm as always there is a point in you which remains untouched by anything. Be yourself and why you should change it. You'll do good.
Sincerely
A_l

tawny
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 14

2 posted 2000-05-11 06:09 PM


i like the whole idea of 'breaking your words' because that is an impossible thought that has crossed my mind more than once.

the whole aloneness feeling, along with the decline in anger at the end show your point through to the end.  well done.

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