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emptyness
Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95
mobile,Ala,USA

0 posted 2000-05-08 11:08 PM


i have returned
those who doubted my arrival are fools
i am back with a vengence
and will take what is rightfully mine

if you didnt think i would be back
then you dont trust me
if you dont trust me you dont respect me
if you dont respect me you dont love me
if you dont love me how could you have missed me

"hey guys my computer was down so ive ben reading all the poems i missed for like 3 hrs yall definatly didnt waste any time while i was gone. well it nice to be back see yall later"


 "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write


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DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
1 posted 2000-05-08 11:41 PM


hmmm.. nice poem, welcome back (tho I've been gone for a while too...)

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
2 posted 2000-05-09 03:48 PM


Hi!
That was beautiful and I can relate it totally.

Sincerely
A_l

pharon
Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama
3 posted 2000-05-09 04:48 PM


hey babe!! missed you muchly    you're not fully back yet...i haven't seen any new stuff. come on - you really are slacking!! j/k
  later gator
     -pharon-

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