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rlm1519
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since 2000-05-09
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0 posted 2000-05-09 12:47 PM


Everyone is going to die someday,
Some sooner than others.
Me I feel like dying right now,
It’s been one of those days ya know.
When nothing goes your way,
Every thing goes wrong.
When you wanna go out, dig a hole and bury your self,
Right then and there.
It’d be nice but for now I guess I have to live,
To suffer, to languish, to deteriorate.
I guess that’s life for ya though.


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LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-05-09 10:14 AM


rlm,

First of all, Welcome to Passions! I hope to see more of you here.

About the poem, it's well written, and you obviously have talent. Everyone feels like this sometimes, especally us teens. But we have to remember that life is a gift. THAT'S life. <!signature-->

<font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde</font>

[This message has been edited by LoveBug (edited 05-09-2000).]

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