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Teen Poetry #2

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*~Juliet~*
Junior Member

since 2000-05-02

Posts 19
Key West

0 posted 2000-05-04 06:42 PM

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You are my love,
You are my life,
Always there,
Through all my strife.

You make me laugh,
You make me smile,
Even if we only talk,
For a little while.

I want to be with you,
Until the end,
From dusk 'till dawn,
Again & again.

Please reassure me,
I'll always be yours,
Whatever it takes,
My love, my amor. *

hopeful
Junior Member

since 2000-04-19

Posts 27

1 posted 2000-05-04 07:33 PM

This is a great poem. I know how you feel. Keep up the good work.

<3,
Hopeful

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

2 posted 2000-05-05 09:14 PM

Not bad! ^_^ ummm.. 'amor' is a spanish word, isn't it? hehe, well, it doesn't really fit here, 'cos it's a verb. But hey, bit a poetic liscence never goes amis, huh? ^_^

nice..

Lynne

*~Juliet~*
Junior Member

since 2000-05-02

Posts 19
Key West

3 posted 2000-05-07 10:34 PM

Thank you so much, Hopeful...I really appreciate it. =)

Lynne--thanks for the compliment...fyi- amor is the Spanish word for love....amar is the verb. lol. oh well. doesnt matter anyway...just needed something that rhymed.

tnx!!!

Rachel8383
Junior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 44

4 posted 2000-05-08 12:23 PM

This was really great, true about the amor part, took spanish for three years. It was great, keep it up. rachel

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