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karmi New Member
since 2000-05-04
Posts 6Lima, Ohio... usa |
this one's written to my (ex)boyfriend also.... this was written when everything was really great between us. *SpeCiaL* [Anthony] i look deeply into your eyes... the people around us inhales and sigh. they don't see me trembling from your touch, they've never known of a love this much. they want to know, they all wish to see... all the love you've put inside me. i smile and nod as you lean near, i close my eyes while you whisper in my ear.... you speak so softly of a love so true, i am happy, all thanks to you. you'll never know how much i care, i live each day, for the things we share. you brought out a new person in me, you took away my fears and you set me free. i sit in awe of what you do... no matter what, i'm forever amazed by you. -much love- ~karmi* (if you wanna see more poetry, go to: http://mypage.goplay.com/iseeyouinme/ ) |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a very nice poem, I can feel the love. It must have been very difficult when you broke up. Is your poem "InSide" the aftermath of this relationship? Well, keep writing! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a very nice poem, I can feel the love. It must have been very difficult when you broke up. Is your poem "InSide" the aftermath of this relationship? Well, keep writing! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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karmi New Member
since 2000-05-04
Posts 6Lima, Ohio... usa |
thanx! actually... this poem was written to another guy... my relationship before my last. but, now "inside" sorda abides to my deal w/ my ex...  ( it's a long story... the deal with the two guys. (my ex & my ex before him)... but a lot of my poems... basically all but a few, are written to, or inspired by them! -much love- ~karmi* (if you wanna see more poetry, go to: http://mypage.goplay.com/iseeyouinme/ ) |
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Rachel8383 Junior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 44 |
well, it is great to have people to inspire writing, i'm sorry about having it end, a love like this, but out of everything we learn something. keep writing,it was great |
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