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Teen Poetry #2

if i would die

Seysi
New Member

since 2000-05-06

Posts 8
kortrijk in belgium

0 posted 2000-05-07 04:20 PM

If I would die
no one would care
no one would cry
they all would stare
at my grave beneath
there i am, under their feet
no word would be spoken
no muscle would move
no heart would be broken
no love would be proved
they all would stare
and just don't care

karmi
New Member

since 2000-05-04

Posts 6
Lima, Ohio... usa

1 posted 2000-05-07 04:28 PM

i love it! but, is that truly how you feel? it brought tears to my eyes! it was very to the point. i can relate to that a lot... i went thru depression that year, and when i thought about suicide... that's how i felt. but, things'll get better! PEOPLE CARE!!

look up at the sun, i'm sure it's shining bright!

-much love-
~karmi*
(if you wanna see more poetry, go to: http://mypage.goplay.com/iseeyouinme/ )

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2000-05-07 06:36 PM

Welcome to the family....here at Passions you will find that we do care. Our hearts are big enough to love everyone...and we don't judge you...life is precious and so are you...please check your email for a special message.

Rachel8383
Junior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 44

3 posted 2000-05-08 12:20 PM

i have wondered this before, how many people would come to my funeral if i died, how many people would actually care. at least you can express yourself, putting it into words is a great way of therapy. keep it up. rachel

Seysi
New Member

since 2000-05-06

Posts 8
kortrijk in belgium

4 posted 2000-05-08 06:53 AM

thank you for all the good things you sweet people wrote about my poem and yes... i really feel that way sometimes

Seysi

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