|Teen Poetry #2|
since 2000-04-26Posts 46
Poems that depict or glorify this issue are against our guidelines. If you have any questions about this please e-mail me. I can not get to your e-mail at this time.
[This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 05-04-2000).]
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since 1999-11-14Posts 69
This is a really great poem and sadly I can relate on this sensitive subject. The only suggestion I have is to continue and make it longer! If this is a pesonal poem, keep your head up and things will get better. If you need someone to talk to I'm here for you - ILoveSrfrs@aol.com.
since 2000-01-25Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
Ouch. What a vivid description. Like IloveSFRS said, it is not the way out of your problems...the way out is to resolve them and your feelings so that you can enjoy life.
Love and hugs,
"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
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