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lost soul
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since 2000-04-30
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0 posted 2000-05-01 09:49 PM


he comes into my dreams
he speaks to me from far away
i run through a forest full of towering trees
and beautiful flowers
their fragrances overpowering me
and than i see him
a dark handsome stranger
i run to him
yearning for him to hold me
hold me in his strong arms
to seduce me with thick accent
but as i come closer he slowly fades away into nothing
i stand alone
shaken by his suddden disapearance
thats when i wake up
and wait to fall asleep again
in hopes he will appear
and that i will be able to hold him the next time



 

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son of man
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since 2000-04-25
Posts 125

1 posted 2000-05-01 09:59 PM


great depiction. i should know, i am that stranger... lol, j/k.
really, you did a fine job here.

 

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