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Was it to much to ask
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Was it to much to ask |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Was it to much to ask to try to hold you. Was it to much to to try to make you mine. Was it to much to ask to say that I care. Was it to much to ask to show I was fair. Was it to much to ask to gaze into your eyes. Was it to much to ask to make you eveything to me. Was it to much to ask to say I love you. Was it to much to ask when I let you go. Was it to much to ask just to be with you. Was it to much to ask when we fought. Was it to much to ask not to die alone. For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
I can totally agree with this poem, when your in a relationship and you have strong feelings for someone and you feel like it's wrong in some way to feel this way. Very good!!!smiles  poe  |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
I totally understand how you feel. It sorta explains what I've been going through for 2 weeks now. You put in nice words. Keep up the work. "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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