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lost soul
Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 20
0 posted 2000-05-01 06:39 PM

you touched me with your words
you made me feel free to jump around
your kisses were sweet
as sweet as candy
your touches made me tingle with sweet sensation
you held me when I was down
you were my personal clown when I need to laugh
you were there for me when everyone else turned their back on me
you were my guardian angel
my dark prince
I'll love you forever
even though you are no longer here.


 
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huney_mel
Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 52
1 posted 2000-05-01 08:26 PM

i know the feeling, the expression you have used here is great, keep up the good work  
love mel  
son of man
Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125
2 posted 2000-05-02 12:22 PM

i knew there were memories of happiness somewhere in that burdened mind of yours.
perhaps you understand what true love is.
it never diminishes, even when you've been hurt. i really enjoy the honesty you display in your poetry. your genuine emotion adds alot to your work. good job.
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