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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
a broken heart beats wildly within my aching chest its wings tread violently against the wind from my soul that cannot rest flood rains pour inside my mind beating like a drum emotions mingle with the drops as constant as a hum my head hangs low in mourning for the wine i cannot sip hallucinations come to life when i still taste you on my lips i think about your every curve a place to rest a kiss where i can lie my head to dream as i sleep in heavenly bliss so slowly i close my eyes in an attempt to change the pace only to make my blood rush faster as i visualize your face into your eyes i have fallen deep into the blue yet in my eyes you've taken flight and to my head you flew i want to run my fingers down your cheek and under your chin lift your face into my view to kiss you once again take you softly into my arms whisper in your ear cry no more my sweet princess your valiant prince is here now i must awaken from a dream i'll never leave though my eyes may seem to open in my heart i'm still asleep still clinging on to fantasies of your gentle gorgeous smile embracing you so tenderly forever in a while |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is a truly beautiful and such a sincere poem  great work.....you have written some very impressive pieces Bec  i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known? i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all i took my time, i hurried up the choice was mine i didn't think enough I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone I never conquered, rarely came 16 just held such better days Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside The world was wide, too late to try The tour was over i'd survived I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again You'll close it off, board it up Remember the time i spilled the cup Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault I never conquered, rarely came But tomorrow holds such better days Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside The world was wide, the time goes by The tour is over, i've survived I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone 'Adam's Song' Blink 182 |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
This is amazing!  You have such passion in your writing, it's incredible. I'm very impressed, I hope you keep writing! Peace.*~Meredith~* *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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purplesunshine Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 10 |
Sweetie, I remember the first time you read this poem to me. It seems like it was just yesterday. Keep on using your talents. You know I will go on loving you forever. Forever yours, *Mandy* |
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