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lost soul Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 20 |
Love is a harsh reality with broken promises and hateful words With tears of pain And painful thoughts Where broken heart do not mend and unmended hearts go on painfully So why is there love? When love seems to just shadow hate where people turn to love to wind up getting hurt I seeked love out in all the wrong places and now I stand alone a tormented soul Will there be no end to all of this? No...for love needs to feed upon those unfortunate people who like me searched love out and love did its deed it hurt those who were like me. |
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huney_mel Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 52 |
this is good also, you have a good talent. Its great that you are expressing your feelings but you have to work them out inside you as soon as possible. Love feeds on the people that need it, and it may be at the wrong times, but its only a matter of time before you find love again.... Love melly  |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
love is like the age old ying yang, bearing good, bearing bad. i know how love gone sour can bring a tremendous amount of emotion, but doesn't love bring so much joy as it proceeds? find the right love, and you'll never hurt again. then you'll change your opinion, i'm sure. |
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