Teen Poetry #2 |
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Suicide of your friend |
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huney_mel Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 52 |
Life is unfair, The people we love sometimes go away, But this is always for the best, You'll leave your loved ones someday. I know your in so much hurt, But the bad times will pass, I can promise you that, And for you i'll promise they'll go fast. Everyone has to leave this earth, No matter what way they decide to go, Some people stay forever on this earth, Some peoples lives go incredibly slow. You have to understand, Everything happens for a reason and thats true, Maybe to make people a better person, And maybe thats why it happened to you. You may have been really upset, You may have shed many tears, But no-one can take away the memories you have, After so many years. I know she was so special, And she will always be too, And now shes your guardian angel up in heaven, Always watching over you. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a beautiful poem on a tragic topic. I hope you are able to give your friend the support she needs. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Mel, I've been waiting patiently for you to post something new...and I'm not dissapointed at all. Once again you've put something so difficult to talk about into beautiful words. And like Lizzie, I hope you were able to give your friend the support she needed. <hugs> ~Sarah |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
You did a nice job writing about something that so sad. It's tough to lose someone and move on, but we find that time heals though the memory always stays. Good writing. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
This poem is wonderful but it is so sad! I enjoyed reading it and would love to read more of your work. Lindsay ![]() |
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huney_mel Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 52 |
thanx everyone for repling, its soo good of you to do that ![]() Thanx with love Mel ![]() ![]() |
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