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hoppy
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 271


0 posted 2000-04-27 01:34 AM



look at me
watch me
touch me
feel me
i'm spinning round
help i fell down
broken here i am
fallen on the floor
come and get me
i think you touched me
i think you watched me
you looked at me
i seen you fall down
i'm going around
see what i found
i'm going now

Hoppy
4-27-00

 There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

Don't worry about people stealing your ideas. If your ideas are any good, you'll have to ram them down people's throats.
-- Howard Aiken


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son of man
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since 2000-04-25
Posts 125

1 posted 2000-04-27 03:37 AM


strange poem, yet really fun to read.
i sense a playful attitude; childlike.
this poem makes absolutely no sense to me.
i think it's great!

 

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