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since 1999-11-13
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0 posted 2000-04-25 12:00 PM


This new feeling,
It scares me.
This new feeling,
It intrigues me.
This new feeling,
It confuses me.
This new feeling,
Is you.

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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
1 posted 2000-04-25 01:14 AM

short but oh so sweet. Good job.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
2 posted 2000-04-26 03:27 AM

Pretty much the same as Sam said.... short but sweet. Nice.


 "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
3 posted 2000-04-26 12:55 PM

I understand your poem all to well.  When I met my now boyfriend, I felt that same way.  And to tell you the truth I kinda still do but that's because mystery between two people is good sometimes.  Keep up the good work.

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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
4 posted 2000-04-26 02:56 PM

Your poem bears testimony to the fact that so much emotion can be captured in so few words. Great job!!

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
5 posted 2000-04-26 03:58 PM


son of man
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125

6 posted 2000-04-27 03:16 AM

i've never quite heard feelings brought to a point so expressly. i think it's great.


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