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ABubblesB15
New Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 5
Chico, CA, USA

0 posted 2000-04-25 10:07 PM


Always

If the moon and stars fall,
I always will be there.

If your heart aches for love,
I will always be there.

If you need a friend,
I will always be there.

If you need someone to love or to love you,
I will always be there.

When times are tough,
I will always be there.

No matter what happens,
If you are hurt, sad, or in trouble,
I will ALWAYS be there.


This poem is dedicated to my botfriend whom I love so deeply love.



© Copyright 2000 Ashley - All Rights Reserved
MerritW
Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33
Texas
1 posted 2000-04-25 10:46 PM


That's really really good.  I'm sure your boyfriend loved it.  I really enjoyed it!

Merrit

 *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend)

anonymousfemale
Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
2 posted 2000-04-26 03:20 AM


This is a nice poem to write to your poem. I am sure that he appreciates it.

~AF~

 "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry


DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
3 posted 2000-04-26 08:49 AM


Ah, I love it. In fact, I love it so much that I sent it in a greeting card to my girlfriend.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

sunshine17
Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89
Bonduel, WI USA
4 posted 2000-04-26 12:52 PM


This is an awesome poem.  I feel the same way for my boyfriend too.  You did a really good job, keep up the good work.  I look forward to reading more.
Gina

angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
5 posted 2000-04-26 04:01 PM


I like this poem a lot.  I'm jealous- I wish I could find someone to love like that, and someone who loves me as much.  I wish you the best in your relationship.  
Love,
Kristi Lynn

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