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0 posted 2000-04-25 07:53 PM

Well this poems for my best friend that's moveing away and i hope she come's back to visit me... I'll miss her very much..

Like a needle in a haystack
true friends are really hard to find.
That's why I so thankful
that I can call you mine.

Whenever I needed a shoulder
you're there to chatch my tears.
You've kept my many secrets
throught the passing years.

You've been there through my success
You've withnessed my defeats.
I'll remember the good times we shared
and pray that the bed ones don't repeat themselves.

With you my heart is honest
but there's only one thing I never have told you.
Thank you for everything you've done-
there's no one else like you.

© Copyright 2000 SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt - All Rights Reserved
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since 2000-03-09
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Missouri, USA
1 posted 2000-04-25 08:49 PM

That is a beautiful and touching poem. Your friends sounds very special.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

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2 posted 2000-04-25 10:00 PM

This is a nice, touching piece. Your friend sounds like one that you can always count on. Apart from a few typos this poem is lovely.


 "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

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3 posted 2000-04-26 09:35 AM

Thank you two both of you!!! I really hope i dont lose my friend when she moves... but i know she'll alway's be there.. but thank you again to both of you!!! take care!!
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4 posted 2000-04-26 04:26 PM

Good friends are hard to come by
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5 posted 2000-04-28 07:28 AM

distance shouldn't effect a friendship that should really be
beautiful tribute...if a friend is worth writing a poem over...then they must have an impressive impact on your life


 i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known?
i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all
i took my time, i hurried up
the choice was mine i didn't think enough
I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone
I never conquered, rarely came
16 just held such better days
Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside
The world was wide, too late to try
The tour was over i'd survived
I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone
I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown
Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again
You'll close it off, board it up
Remember the time i spilled the cup
Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault
I never conquered, rarely came
But tomorrow holds such better days
Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside
The world was wide, the time goes by
The tour is over, i've survived
I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone

'Adam's Song'
Blink 182

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6 posted 2000-04-29 04:11 PM

BeC thanks for your support!! i really need all the help i need right now!! But i understand now that she has to go for the better and i have to hurt for the worst, but i'm going to drive to her!!! well got to go buh bye!!!!!!
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Floating gently on a cloud....
7 posted 2000-04-30 07:09 AM

A special friend has inspired a special poem! This is a lovely tribute and I sure hope that you two manage to stay friends. I wrote a poem about friendship over distance..if you wanna read it, here is the link: /pip/Forum27/HTML/000996.html

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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8 posted 2000-05-02 09:11 AM

Thanks Lizzie... and thanks to everyone else who responded to my poem! thanks again!!
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since 2000-01-13
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9 posted 2000-05-02 09:51 AM

When someone who you love very much, and who has always been there with you through everything you've dealt with, leaves, it hurts more than almost anything else. Isn't it funny that boyfriends and girlfriends never last, popularity and "in-crowds" never last, but friendship can last forever? I hope you and your friend keep in touch and stay close after she moves, and I love your poem, it's just beautiful. Keep up the good work!  


 *There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
(by me)

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10 posted 2000-05-02 06:50 PM

Lyric~ thank you very much for thoes kind words, it really means something in the way you said it. I do see that boyfriend and girlfriend relationship doesn't last that long once there split up but w/their best friend whom ever that may be it last forever! but its kinda hard as i said befor to let go of her. We have never been apart!! and i hurt very much! but i'm making every moment w/her locked inside of my heart and in my head!! But as i said again its hard just to see her from day to day because i know that when i come to school one of these days she'll no longer be there and my heart will then again break into two piece's and i have to mend it back together... anyway thanks for the compliments on the poem...!!  

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11 posted 2000-05-05 09:01 PM

Once you find that special friend, you almost have a guarantee theyll be your friend for a very long time.  dont ever give up on your friendship.  I've done it many times and regret it now!!    Luv-heatherbear
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12 posted 2000-05-06 02:03 AM

Heatherbear~~~ I do agree w/you but right now she's acting really mean towards everyone except some people!! she's not taking anything to serious, so i'm afraid that she know's its comeing close for her to leave and she's pushing me away!! but i guess she need's to do what she need's to do! so i'll be here if she needs me but i can't hold on to her if she doesn't want me to! Thanks for the reply!!
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