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DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA

0 posted 2000-04-24 04:32 PM


I look out the window,
Into the sun,
Far to the east,
An Angel I see.

I look out the window,
Staring at the breeze,
On it's wings,
An Angel I see.

I look out the window,
At the clouds so high,
Staring down at me,
An Angel I do see.

I look out the window,
Watching Flowers bloom,
With bright pink petels,
An Angel I do see.

I look out the window,
Watching birds play,
Singing their song,
An Angel I do see.


Can anyone guess who I wrote this poem for??? hehehe   Yup, my Stacy Angel.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

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Blue Rose
Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 18
Vernonia OR USA
1 posted 2000-04-24 04:48 PM


Wow! Stacy must be a very special person.  I'm new here, so I've never read anything else from you, but from this poem I can tell she's special to you.  Keep up the good work!
DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-04-24 06:25 PM


Yes, Stacy is very special to me. I don't think that I could stand to lose her   but no worries about that eh? "Eat drink and be merry, for tommarow we die." -don't remember.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-04-24 06:44 PM


Stacy is one lucky girl!! Lovely poem.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

DaZeD&cOnFuSeD
Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 32

4 posted 2000-04-24 06:51 PM


Cute poem Dragon, Stacy is a lucky girl...
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dana

DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
5 posted 2000-04-24 10:53 PM


ESP & Lizzie
hehehe, yeah, and I'm so very lucky to have my Stacy Angel  . Thank you for letting me know you like the poem.



 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

4eva_at_heart
Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

6 posted 2000-04-25 12:51 PM


gees...stacy is special!!!
once again...beautiful job

Bec

 "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together"


Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
7 posted 2000-04-26 01:56 AM


lovely poem.. so nice to have someone so special to you.. did I say lovely poem? aah, look at that.. did too..

^_^
Well, I can't stay, I'd love to read some more.. but I only have a little time to read a few poems in this forum.. =(

anyway, lovely poem.. hehe

Lynne

son of man
Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125

8 posted 2000-04-27 03:10 AM


sometimes feelings are best expressed in simplicity. simply put,stacy is what you visualize as an angel, and you love her dearly. how much more poetic can one be, than to sum up thoughts so glorious in such ample words? good job.

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