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hoppy
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 271


0 posted 2000-04-22 12:34 PM


I didn't write this for people to write good poem or "how sad" or "life's not that bad" etc...  I wrote this for me and posted it so someone could read it.  So just read it and think about it, think about everything, remember.  Just sit and think, we don't do enough of that, just sit alone and think about what in the world we're doing.  so don't respond, just think.


i died tonight
i heard your word
looked in your eyes
lost my sight
while dry tears fell
on empty ears
i couldn't save you
so i let you be
what can i do
but give you a tear
so you'll remember me

--Written by: Hoppy
4-22-00


 There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line.
-- Oscar Levant

Don't worry about people stealing your ideas. If your ideas are any good, you'll have to ram them down people's throats.
-- Howard Aiken


© Copyright 2000 Hoppy - All Rights Reserved
DaZeD&cOnFuSeD
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since 2000-04-20
Posts 32

1 posted 2000-04-22 04:08 AM


Sorry Hoppy but I like it and Im bumping it up!
DåzêÐ&CõñfûsëÐ
dana

**Angel**
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since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

2 posted 2000-04-22 09:44 AM


sorry! Bump
ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-04-23 06:32 AM


Sorry...this beautiful poem deserves another-BUMP!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

MerritW
Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33
Texas
4 posted 2000-04-23 05:12 PM


just one more bump

 *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend)

DaZeD&cOnFuSeD
Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 32

5 posted 2000-04-24 06:47 PM


Bump for you and me, bump Im gonna set it free... bump, bump wew bump, bump you!!!
hehehehe sorry I just thought of that song when bumping this up hehehehe
DåzêÐ&CõñfûsëÐ
dana

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