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MrHat
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since 2000-04-15
Posts 34
Gilroy, Ca

0 posted 2000-04-15 02:44 AM


UNTITLED

Kindred bliss between two lovers
Each knowing that there is no other
Basking in the glow of spring
Love is such a sacred thing
Fireplace full of raging fire
To lovers exploring each one's desire
A couple talks all through the night
With morning far out of sight
They gaze into each other's eyes
And think "I will love you till i die

© Copyright 2000 Brad B - All Rights Reserved
anonymousfemale
Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
1 posted 2000-04-15 03:08 AM


Firstly welcome to Passions. I hope that you enjoy your time here.

Secondly this is a nice poem to enter with. Light and beautiful.

~AF~

 "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry


DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-04-15 03:19 AM


first and formost, welcome to Passions (I almost wrote insomnia.... *shrugs, need sleep*) ANYWHO, Welcome to Passions, I hope you enjoy your stay.

Second, that is a very beautiful poem. I like it lots.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

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