|Teen Poetry #2|
|Sea of Irony|
since 2000-01-27Posts 271
Sea of Irony
my heart's hanging open can't you see
i'm bleeding on the floor
losing my mind in a sea of irony
the forgotten came back last night
came back and i opened the door
thought i'd have one last look
thought it was her at my door
i was wrong last night
opening my door i seen
nothing but shadows
chanting of her vanity
the darnkess grabed me
wrenching me to the ground
death had come to take me
killing myself is what i found
so i unlocked myself
let it be free
i lost my mind back there
in a sea of irony
"Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it."
Henry David Thoreau
Don't look... you might see.
Don't listen... you might hear.
Don't think... you might learn.
Don't walk... you might stumble.
Don't run... you might fall.
Don't make a decision... you might be wrong.
Don't live...you might die.
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since 2000-03-31Posts 162
Wonderful poem. I have enjoyed reading your work. You are an excellent writer.
since 2000-01-25Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
Yep, wonderful poem by a great writer!
Love and hugs,
since 2000-01-15Posts 2034
Nice title and poem. Good writing.
A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
since 1999-06-16Posts 3850
In the space between moments
Very powerful and well done.
As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
since 2000-04-12Posts 113
Very strong poem. I really like it. I can relate to those feelings. Good work.
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
-the words of a friend
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