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since 2000-01-27
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0 posted 2000-04-08 12:55 PM

Sea of Irony

my heart's hanging open can't you see
i'm bleeding on the floor
losing my mind in a sea of irony
the forgotten came back last night
came back and i opened the door
thought i'd have one last look
thought it was her at my door

i was wrong last night
opening my door i seen
nothing but shadows
chanting of her vanity

the darnkess grabed me
wrenching me to the ground
death had come to take me
killing myself is what i found

so i unlocked myself
let it be free
i lost my mind back there
in a sea of irony

---Written by:Hoppy


 "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it."
Henry David Thoreau

Don't look... you might see.
Don't listen... you might hear.
Don't think... you might learn.
Don't walk... you might stumble.
Don't run... you might fall.
Don't make a decision... you might be wrong.
Don't might die.

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since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

1 posted 2000-04-08 01:09 PM

Wonderful poem. I have enjoyed reading your work. You are an excellent writer.


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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-09 09:43 AM

Yep, wonderful poem by a great writer!

Love and hugs,

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-04-14 12:43 PM

Nice title and poem.  Good writing.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

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Posts 3850
In the space between moments
4 posted 2000-04-14 11:03 PM

Very powerful and well done.

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~

since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
5 posted 2000-04-14 11:56 PM

Very strong poem. I really like it. I can relate to those feelings. Good work.


 "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
-the words of a friend

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