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Teen Poetry #2

To my dearist friend

jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

0 posted 2000-04-14 09:02 AM

To my dearist friend,
I am here,

Here to watch your back in times of troble,
Here to find you in your time of need,

For my dearist friend you saved me from myself,
What do I mean??
You brought back my sence of life in general,
In all honesty you just broke a seal placed opon me.

This seal was causing me to act in a way unlike I do and this scared some people.

Yet in these time of my rage she stuck by me and put up with me and I finally changed into the peaceful man I love to be.

So to my dearist I will be here to save your life and share you love

To my dearist friend Thank you

For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-04-14 03:24 PM

This is a very sweet and heartfelt poem...I love it!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2000-04-14 10:26 PM

This is a nice piece. It is obvious that your friend has done so much for you and it is always great to have a feeling like yours. Keep up the good work.

~AF~

"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

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