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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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Forgive Me A soft jagged edge, Calmly screams at me. Ripping, Through my mind. I plead for it’s forgiveness, Hoping for redemption, All is lost; There is nothing to forgive. |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Welcome to Passion, Yu Lan. Good poem but unfortunately, no one here appreciates it, try the corner club. ^_^ Jõmes |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a beautiful poem! Welcome to Passions! We are glad to have you here! Stick around in this forum for a while, I'm sure people will respond soon. You should also try the corner pub...I post in both place....it is very friendly in there and you would be most welcome!! Stay in both...they are both gr8!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
hey! firstly WELCOME TO PASSIONS! and your first post is great...the words you used are so powerful!! great first post and hope to hear more from you Bec |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
This was a really great poem...very powerful. And a great first post. It's hard when you don't get a lot of feedback, but keep on posting!! I can't wait to read more. ~Sarah |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
<font face="Arial, Arial, Verdana" color="#ff0000" size="2">Very nice poem. So emotional and desparate! Welcome to Passions. Will be looking for more of your writing.</font><!signature--> <font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. </font> [This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 04-14-2000).] |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Welcome to Passions Yu Lan. I have enjoyed reading your poem. I would love to read more! Lindsay |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Thanx ppl! ^_^ yes, I will post some of my poetry in the Corner Pub too.. Grrr.. James.. don't be rude.. hehe.. joking.. ^_^ Lynne |
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