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i love you too much
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i love you too much |
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huney_mel Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 52 |
I dont know why i love you, You nothing but a bastard you see, I dont know what i see you in you, Or what you saw in me. I dont know why i love you so much, the love is just so strong, Ive never felt like this before, I know this love is not wrong. I'm in a relationship with someone else, But every song i relate to you, I can't help but to think of you, And if only you knew. I wish that you'd come around, And kiss me once again, God Liam i want you back, But helpless i complain. I think im convincing myself, That im not in love with you, But this is the closest ive got to love, and i knoiw this love is true. |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
ack! melly...glenn is special...don't let the thought of liam make you think otherwise Bec |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Mell....Remeber Glenn ok...I don't know Liam but if you hated him so much, don't let him come back into your head OK. Think of what you have with Glenn!! otherwise good poem. It is a bit confusing at the start though but maybe I just can't read. EJ |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
good poem, nice flow and rythem. Anywho, I don't know anything about anything, but usualy the true feelings are the ones that don't burn so bright, stay with what you know you have, don't try to get what may only be a miraj. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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heart_on_sleeve Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 55 |
Very true poem.I relate to the same thing that your going through which i am right now. Awsome poem. Heart_on_sleeve  |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Oh, what a fantastic poem. I can totally relate because I feel as though I am going through the same thing. I hope it works out for you. Thank you Lindsay |
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Suzanne Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 18Florida |
WOW! you could not have said it better! i am going through almost the exact same thing right now. i really enjoyed your poem and i cant wait to read more. i hope everything works out for the best!  |
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huney_mel Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 52 |
thanx guys, but glenn and i are over. No one understands the love i had with liam and the love i still have for him. He is always in my heart and i miss him sooo much! Love Mel  |
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