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MY verson of a happy poem
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MY verson of a happy poem |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Come on, Come all, Look to see a man who is over six feet tall. Come to me, Try to see my arts, If you have trouble seeing them look into my heart. Oh my heart such a beatiful site. It is the size of texas (or bigger) which is just right. My eyes, My eyes. Story behind them. For when I am in love they never dim, But shine and sparkle so brite, Anyone know when I am in love day or night. The sparkling from my eye sends a messege. The messege is to that Special girl (in which I think I found finally). A beakon for all the world to see (expecially her). The beakon is my love shineing ever so brite for her. My word is a pact of a special orgin. So when she reads this I will be waiting for you to love me I promise...That is my WORD. For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I like your version of a happy poem! well written. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I also like your version of a happy poem....it sure made me smile! It's a very sweet love poem. Keep posting!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
ah, a very happy poem indeed. Keep up the good work. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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