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The War of Love |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
The cool wind blows through my hair, And I think I feel your touch, A tear falls from my eyes, You're touch sails it away into the air, You say "Don't cry, we don't need the rain..." "...Why the tears? I love you." You amaze me and I no one can compare, You seduce my heart and my life, With your deep kisses, And your light blue eyes, You touch the current of love, Deeply inside of my soul that flows, Like a warm rough river. You lock out your games from me, For I have never done you wrong, You are my truth, I'm in love with your mind, For as hectic as it is, You are so different, But I am just like you, Never leave me, For I am yours forever. Senseless games we play, on those who hurt us, For us there are no opsticles, Why would anyone dare?, I care not for their objection, Those who object I care not about. I care so much for you, I'd kill to keep your happiness, You are mine no one can come between, Our love is so strong, Our love can never break, Armaggeddon is our ending love, You have shown me who I really am, Someone with a strong will, A leader of my own life, Brave to persistantly take, The respecter of your healing heart, I'll save you from anymore pain, This is my proof...I truly love you! ~JeNnYeMeShAn~  (No explaination for this poem.) "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a good, strong poem. I like the way that you have highlighted that fact that this person has helped you discover who you really are. It is always good to find this out about yourself. Nice work. ~AF~ What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Powerful poem....you sound like a pretty ruthless couple!! I am glad he helped you find you cos that's really important. I wish you all the joy in this relationship! Love and hugs. Lizzie  |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
Thankx AF and ESP... He is a really great guy and we won't break up for anyone. this poem is about people getting in the way and how I won't let anyone get in the way of our happiness. Yes we are a ruthless couple and we both have a lot of confidence in this relationship. As for the question:"Is it the same Nate Kristi was with?" That is yes. She cheated on him and had no reason. He deserved better and I will give him better. Kristi no longer cares so it's all good. As for Kristi and I's friendship...it is over and the end of our friendship was long over due to begin with. We are both happy and moving on with our lives because HEY! people come and go. That's life. Thank you for replying and I hope to here more soon. Take Care Everyone! ~JennyeMeshan "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Well, thanks for the explanations/answers etc. I hope he treats you well. I hope he doesn't hurt you or you him. You guys sound like a strong couple. I wonder how long the strength will hold out....for a long time I hope!! Sorry that your friendship with Kristi is gone. She's a nice kid. Did she cheat on Nate? I thought he was playing head games with her. Anyways, Love and hugs, Lizzie |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
what can i say..beautiful poem....and best of luck i have read all your poems on your feelings for others and it sounds like you and nate have it made best wishes Bec |
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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
beautiful poem, you have found your true love, natalie... |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
Everyone~ Thankx for everything! Yes Kristi Cheated on Nate. That's why he was playing games with her head. I have never done anything wrong to hurt him and I don't intend to. He is too special to me. Thankx again and take care of yourselves! ~JennyeMeshan "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
*Booop!* "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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