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natalie
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 56


0 posted 2000-04-11 03:08 PM


When I fall
you help me to stand up
When I cry
you show me how to laugh
When my heart is broken
you heal it
When everything looks dark
you show me the light
I know how it feels
When everything looks bad
I know how it feels
to have a friend that lightens up the day
You helped me,
let me help you

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**Angel**
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since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

1 posted 2000-04-11 03:17 PM


Wonderful poem. I am glad you have someone so special.
Keep posting!

Lindsay

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-12 04:23 AM


This is a lovely, sweet poem. Having someone to stick by who sticks by you is a wonderful feeling.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

3 posted 2000-04-12 04:50 AM


this is a sweet poem...and it is so satisfying when we can return the favour

great post

Bec

 "tears are the essence of our souls"


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