Teen Poetry #2 |
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wise advice to females |
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NaTaLy Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 43brooklyn,ny,usa |
i woke up one morning and thought "god,life is great" the sun was shining the birds were chirping and i had a smile from ear to ear today was my one month anniversary today,i had chosen to live instead of die i was reading YM and chuckled as i saw the advice column this can never happen to me,i thought but the sad truth is, it did and now my heart sits before me shattered into a million pieces by an uncaring monster whome i gave my innocense to for the sake of being loved by him. and now i have no choice i have to replace my heart for a cold hard piece of stone i have no choice but this is only temporary becouse today i will give up my struggle and choose not to live. ~~~~~~February 18 1985-april 10 2000~~~~~~~ p.s.~never trust anyone nat<~~~~funny girl |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Nat...don't let anybody destroy your trust. Trust is so important. Some time you will find someone who looks at you and sees only how much he loves you. You'll have to trust that love for it to blossom. Trust brings tears to everybody but it also brings much happiness. Don't give up hun...blue skies around the corner. Don't let the monster take away your trust in life. Love and hugs, Lizzie PS If you wanna talk, email me at [email protected] You can trust me....I promise!! |
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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
I feel your pain, 'cause I 'm telling myself not to trust anyone, and not to love anyone, but you can't help it, I think, everybody will eventually find someone, I'm really believing this,and I really hope it's true, but you should never give up you live for this guy, he doesn't deserve it, if you wanna talk, I really understand it: [email protected] natalie... |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Oh hun! I know how you feel! But, one thing..I think you should know that there are lots of people you can trust. For example: everyone here at Passions! We are all your friends. If you need to talk just email me at [email protected] Wonderful poem, keep posting. ![]() ![]() [This message has been edited by **Angel** (edited 04-11-2000).] |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Never let any man be the reason to end your life, if he hurt you so much and left you the way he did, then sweety he doesn't deserve you. You are someone who needs someone very special because you too are special. I know how you feel, and it is very painful, but I believe that if a man can't learn to love you the way you want them to, then they are pathetic. No offense to all the guys, your all different, but it's the scum that deserve a good swift kick in the face. But anyways, look on the bright side, your free to find someone better who loves you as much as you love them. Never give up on love, because love requies patient dear. Smile!!!! If you want to talk to me you can e-mail me, I'll be there for you 100%!!!! Never give up on life!!! ![]() ![]() |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is such a great poem....but so sad ![]() don't give up on others just because of one guy who has decided to pass on your love...i'm sure he is well unaware of what he is missing out on ![]() keep the hope and share the trust ![]() smile ![]() Bec "tears are the essence of our souls" |
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