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My Girlfriend |
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Chevy New Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 6 |
When i see my girlfriend my world stops my heart stops and all i see is her nothing else. As she comes closer i feel her touch her hold her. For this is why I live, I walk, I talk I see. Just for her I love her. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a really sweet poem and a great first post! Welcome to Passions! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight." |
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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
how sweet, you really got to give your girlfriend this poem, she will love it, and welcome... natalie |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
What an excellent poem showing your love for her. She would love it, I bet! Welcome to passions.... I would love to see more of your work. Lindsay  [This message has been edited by **Angel** (edited 04-11-2000).] |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is the sweetest!! welcome to passions and a great first post! she is a very lucky girl  Bec "tears are the essence of our souls" |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Good poem welcome friend. Just keep your heart open Always!!! For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Aah, that is sweet.. she is a very lucky girl. ^_^ keep writing Chevy ^_^ Lynne |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Chevy, This was sooo sweet! Your girlfriend is lucky to have you care about her so much. And great first post...welcome to passions!! ~Sarah |
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