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Mustangbabe
New Member

since 2000-04-10

Posts 3
Oklahoma

0 posted 2000-04-10 09:37 PM

When I got to sleep
     I dream of you.
They way you look,
     And the way you smile.
I love the way you'd walk a mile
     For anyone who needs your help.
I dream of the way you look at me,
     And hope you could be together.
When I dream of you,
     I don't want to wake up,
Because I know it wasn't real.

devil_tongue
Member

since 2000-03-02

Posts 50

1 posted 2000-04-10 11:37 PM

Welcome to passions!

This is a lovely poem to enter on. I will be looking forward to reading more of your work.

Chevy
New Member

since 2000-04-10

Posts 6

2 posted 2000-04-10 11:49 PM

I like your poem very much and would love to read more.

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

3 posted 2000-04-11 07:12 AM

Welcome to the family of Passions!! I am sure your work will be a lovely addition to our forum. Lovely first poem!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

natalie
Member

since 2000-04-02

Posts 56

4 posted 2000-04-11 08:17 AM

you know, dreams carry a little bit truth in it, so...
welcome to passions,
natalie...

**Angel**
Member

since 2000-03-31

Posts 162

5 posted 2000-04-11 03:18 PM

Great to have you here at Passions.
Excellent first post.

Lindsay

4eva_at_heart
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 238

6 posted 2000-04-12 05:21 AM

welcome to passions!!
great first post and i hope to hear more from you

Bec

Madden18
Junior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 18
Connecticut

7 posted 2000-04-12 08:45 PM

Hey what's up! I love your poem and I love your title! Keep up the excellent work!

jamesjiao
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon

8 posted 2000-04-14 07:52 AM

It's great. But the worst moment is when you wake up. Everything is gone and you will just feel so downright low. Simple but great poem, you have expressed your feeling well.

Jõmes

Singer1981
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA

9 posted 2000-04-14 10:28 AM

This was really a great poem...straight from the heart. We all have these dreams. Wouldn't it be great if we could just stay asleep forever? Well, here's hoping that your dreams come true.

~Sarah

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