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Mustangbabe
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since 2000-04-10
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Oklahoma

0 posted 2000-04-10 09:37 PM



When I got to sleep
     I dream of you.
They way you look,
     And the way you smile.
I love the way you'd walk a mile
     For anyone who needs your help.
I dream of the way you look at me,
     And hope you could be together.
When I dream of you,
     I don't want to wake up,
Because I know it wasn't real.

© Copyright 2000 Lynn - All Rights Reserved
devil_tongue
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since 2000-03-02
Posts 50

1 posted 2000-04-10 11:37 PM


Welcome to passions!

This is a lovely poem to enter on. I will be looking forward to reading more of your work.


Chevy
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since 2000-04-10
Posts 6

2 posted 2000-04-10 11:49 PM


I like your poem very much and would love to read more.

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-04-11 07:12 AM


Welcome to the family of Passions!! I am sure your work will be a lovely addition to our forum. Lovely first poem!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

      


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

natalie
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 56

4 posted 2000-04-11 08:17 AM


you know, dreams carry a little bit truth in it, so...
welcome to passions,
natalie...

**Angel**
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since 2000-03-31
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5 posted 2000-04-11 03:18 PM


Great to have you here at Passions.
Excellent first post.

Lindsay

4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
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6 posted 2000-04-12 05:21 AM


welcome to passions!!
great first post and i hope to hear more from you



Bec

Madden18
Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 18
Connecticut
7 posted 2000-04-12 08:45 PM


Hey what's up! I love your poem and I love your title! Keep up the excellent work!
jamesjiao
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon
8 posted 2000-04-14 07:52 AM


It's great. But the worst moment is when you wake up. Everything is gone and you will just feel so downright low. Simple but great poem, you have expressed your feeling well.

 J├Ámes

Singer1981
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 148
Fredonia, NY USA
9 posted 2000-04-14 10:28 AM


This was really a great poem...straight from the heart.  We all have these dreams.  Wouldn't it be great if we could just stay asleep forever?   Well, here's hoping that your dreams come true.  
~Sarah

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