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since 2000-04-10
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0 posted 2000-04-10 09:37 PM

When I got to sleep
     I dream of you.
They way you look,
     And the way you smile.
I love the way you'd walk a mile
     For anyone who needs your help.
I dream of the way you look at me,
     And hope you could be together.
When I dream of you,
     I don't want to wake up,
Because I know it wasn't real.

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1 posted 2000-04-10 11:37 PM

Welcome to passions!

This is a lovely poem to enter on. I will be looking forward to reading more of your work.

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2 posted 2000-04-10 11:49 PM

I like your poem very much and would love to read more.

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3 posted 2000-04-11 07:12 AM

Welcome to the family of Passions!! I am sure your work will be a lovely addition to our forum. Lovely first poem!

Love and hugs,


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

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4 posted 2000-04-11 08:17 AM

you know, dreams carry a little bit truth in it, so...
welcome to passions,

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5 posted 2000-04-11 03:18 PM

Great to have you here at Passions.
Excellent first post.


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6 posted 2000-04-12 05:21 AM

welcome to passions!!
great first post and i hope to hear more from you


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7 posted 2000-04-12 08:45 PM

Hey what's up! I love your poem and I love your title! Keep up the excellent work!
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8 posted 2000-04-14 07:52 AM

It's great. But the worst moment is when you wake up. Everything is gone and you will just feel so downright low. Simple but great poem, you have expressed your feeling well.


since 1999-12-02
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9 posted 2000-04-14 10:28 AM

This was really a great poem...straight from the heart.  We all have these dreams.  Wouldn't it be great if we could just stay asleep forever?   Well, here's hoping that your dreams come true.  

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