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Teen Poetry #2

a perfect world

poe_32
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since 2000-04-01

Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

0 posted 2000-04-10 08:06 PM

is it ever a perfect world
never seen before
is this world of war
there is no peace
so there is no perfect world
a perfect world where we can live without worry
that any minute we could be shot to death
and the next time our family would see us
would be dressed in our best clothes
sitting in a box of wood
with too much makeup
to hide all the scars
the scars from our death
this world is like a plaugue apon us
but it's a plaugue we've created
we caused all this was
we caused all this destruction
were killing ourselves by the minute
we cause all the pollution
that intoxicates our lungs
this world is no where close to being perfect
but if everyone relizes that we're the problem
maybe we can change for the better
making our lives a little easier
make a good place to live
for us
for our children
we must make a difference
to make a perfect world.

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-04-11 01:59 AM

I wish that everyone could work together and heal the world but sadly we seem to be too busy destroying it. Your poem describes the evil well.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

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