Teen Poetry #2 |
a perfect world |
poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
is it ever a perfect world never seen before is this world of war there is no peace so there is no perfect world a perfect world where we can live without worry that any minute we could be shot to death and the next time our family would see us would be dressed in our best clothes sitting in a box of wood with too much makeup to hide all the scars the scars from our death this world is like a plaugue apon us but it's a plaugue we've created we caused all this was we caused all this destruction were killing ourselves by the minute we cause all the pollution that intoxicates our lungs this world is no where close to being perfect but if everyone relizes that we're the problem maybe we can change for the better making our lives a little easier make a good place to live for us for our children we must make a difference to make a perfect world. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I wish that everyone could work together and heal the world but sadly we seem to be too busy destroying it. Your poem describes the evil well. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight." |
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