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poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

0 posted 2000-04-10 04:28 PM


Your mindless games you play
leave me in the shadows
confused and dissillusioned
with all the scars from my pain
I need you here with me
but your too far away
those mindless games you play
twist my heart
feel the pain
you never know what it's like
to feel the heart ache when you play those games
you can never know how I feel
you are the one who plays the games
you are the one who loves the games
stop the games
I can't stand those games!
you always hurt me in a way that you can never feel
the pain is like having your heart in two
and then you laugh
those games you play must come to an end
you cannot continue to play these games with me
my heart cannot continue to be broken
I want to be released from you
I need to have my freedom
I want the world to end
so I can no longer play these games with you
I need to make you see
that this is not just a game anymore
that these games you play
will soon take my life
I want to be released
from your torturing and hurting
I feel as though my life is owned by you
and I want to be free from you
I can no longer live with this darkness
this darkness that follows me like a black cloud from the heavens above
the thrill is no longer there
the thrill that leads me to you
the thrill that lead me to this cliff
I look over the edge
can I do this? I ask myself
is this what love has brought me to?
this is my destiny
to leap to the ground with this ache I have
in the depths of my empty soul
to soon be with God
the one man who truely loves me
to think that those games you play have brought me to the end of this pitiful life I've lived
so this is it
this is the end of this sad story without a happy ending
my face is bruised
and my eyes are red
from the nights of crying all alone
I take a step closer
I look down
I look up at the sky
so this is where it has ended
with all those mindless games
I take that leap.......

© Copyright 2000 Jessica Bjarnason - All Rights Reserved
amazon_lover
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-04-10 04:37 PM


You can construct your life with the people you really want and you can trust.

Love is demanding sometimes
But,

Enjoy it when it comes
Cherish it in your lonely times
With for it in troublesome times
Feel it for your lifetimes


natalie
Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56

2 posted 2000-04-10 04:57 PM


I like your poem, 'cause it shows the same pain I feel: that love stinks, sorry for all those who are in love, but I'm not and sorry but I am hurt to much, but I am sure that every one will find someone, and so will you, i am sure about this,
natalie...

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-04-11 01:50 AM


I am sorry your love went wrong, Poe. Just soldier on hun....you'll find the right guy for you, and you'll know it was worth the wait. Don't let this monster who plays games with you destroy you. You are worth more than that. This is a very good poem...full of emotion.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

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